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October 13, 2013
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OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
E-PL5
Shutter Speed
1/4000 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
19 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Oct 12, 2013, 1:56:29 PM
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Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 4.4 (Macintosh)
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PH_101213_03 by IgorBekker PH_101213_03 by IgorBekker
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publicinsomniac Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree that the positioning of the figure is just right, love the starkness from using black and white.  I would, perhaps, rotate the image by a couple of degrees, feel like its tilting downwards towards the left just a little.
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IgorBekker Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
Thank you for the comment! You are right, while the image actually quite straight - it feels like it tilting. And how it feels, perhaps, is more important than how it actually is.
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FGW-Photography Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013   Photographer
Very good capture!
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IgorBekker Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Thanks!
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FGW-Photography Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013   Photographer
you're welcome
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Zpitts Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I really like the contrast and the feeling of emptiness in this photo. Good job!
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IgorBekker Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Thank you for your comment!
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Zpitts Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you're welcome! :hug:
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Ialo-wa Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
nice capture and tones, only the position of the man is way too on the right and it's creating a disbalance on the photo.
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IgorBekker Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Thank you for your thoughtful comment!
Have to disagree with you on the "disbalance" issue :).
I wanted the man very far to edge of the frame, and lots of " empty" space in the middle to create the airy feel. This positioning makes the man rather an observer, than a "hero" of the story.
Now, technically, I feel the man figure is perfectly balanced by the building on the left. The building is bigger, but the person has more weight in a viewer eye, more importance...
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